Novel Progress
I am STILL slogging through chapter six. I’ve been here for days. I’m not blocked or anything, though. It’s just that the chapter needed an enema, and it’s taking longer than I thought
Tag: Stories
Chop It Off!
Writing Advice: Sentences! Now In Easy-To-Swallow Capsules!
I hate long sentences. I hate having to follow a description that takes a long time to settle down. It feels like being shipwrecked. There I am, floating on someone’s words, not knowing if I am going to starve to death before I reach the end.
Imagine reading a sentence out loud. If you have to come up for air, the sentence is too long.
The BIGGEST minutiae 